I Cant See Your Hand

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By Loneliness is condescending •

Hope destroyed and Broken Dreams Lost innocent of ones first kiss The silly things we do for the individuality of fitting in Whispers of shattered love I see you run away again Where have you been? Where are you going? Face bathed in anger covering the fear Take my hand I'll lead you home Can I find the way this time? Losing sight of soiled ground Crumbling where I stand And here I am trying to rebuild your life Off you go to tear it down Falling quickly I cannot catch Holding on tight to you I'm slipping threw my fingers

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April 9, 2005 04:15HEY LAUREN!

hm...well this isnt really feedback....but thats because i am a horrable poet...wait...i am a poet? i hadnt thought so....well i think i might be able to identify with this poem....i really like the flow and the image you left me is great....good job

October 6, 2006 15:27lost the lonely dead

I appreciate the depth of this one *thumbs up*