soul collector

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By tangerine.kidd

<font face=times>May 05, 2005 <br> beating at my skin breaking down my walls screaming so loud no one hearing my calls words of hatred filling up my heart my body frozen preventing my fresh start held against my will there's no way to get free so many years of life there's nothing new to me the person i onced called mom is no longer the person here this new person i gaze upon is no longer my new fear i have seen her type before as i glanced upon my face i have seen the good inside as it vanished without a trace i have seen the evil within as it slowly takes control i have seen the last of me as it has taken my only soul wandering aimlessly through the streets trying to prevent another like me helping those in need trying to keep their souls free... free from the soul collector...free from me.

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February 26, 2005 18:28The Irish Child

Holy Crap. this was amazing. I wish I could write like that!

May 4, 2005 11:58My_pain_your_thrill

This is amazing! I would like to talk to you about poetry.. email me at [email protected]

May 11, 2005 00:10. QUEENIE .

that was awesome.. how'd you colour it and such? does html coding work on this site?

May 19, 2005 15:16Depressed_des

again, really brilliant! I love all your poems-wow!

July 12, 2005 18:39Lizbeth

wow i luv it very deep

July 28, 2005 00:19**Samara********

That was cool! how did you get the coloring? [email protected]

August 14, 2005 17:58Sara

*awed face* i love it!

amzing. absolutely brillant. i love it it speaks a million emotions. very deep.
Heather

You hold a lot of meaning behind your poems and I like that. It's a good way to get out your feelings and thoughts.

March 9, 2006 00:24Lillian

Man, you're fucking brilliant. Give us more!!

June 19, 2006 02:01User

Well...you are very sweet indeed..lucky for me that I read your poems..!!