on the boathouse

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By GINA

I went to the boathouse for some peace and quiet, some time alone. It was so nice out at the boathouse on this cool like summer evening. The wind blew upon my face so gentle like. I inhaled the fresh air smelling the ocean which smelled so clean and fresh. I walked along the boathouse looking out at the evening sky in such bright brilliant colors that spanned high above. As I walked I took everything in as the colors in the sky started to disappear and darkness started to set in. But, the moon suddenly appeared out of nowhere in the darkened sky and it looked so big and glowed so bright, lightening up the whole sky above. It felt so peaceful here, no busy streets, no working hard, no one fussing or fighting just pleasantness here. But, it ended too soon when I realized I had to leave. My time alone here on the boathouse didn't last long enough I thought. I glanced one more time at the big bright moon and walked from the boathouse until another time alone on the boathouse. June 15, 2004 Gina

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December 6, 2007 23:27Simply-Me-20104

WOW!! This has such amazing detail! I can just visualize and completely connect to it!!

January 20, 2009 22:41SMILING DARKNESS

I can feel this moment as I read.
Your words so visual and clear I wish I was in that boathouse.

Sometimes, having to leave to early is what keeps something interesting.

I really like this poem so much

March 18, 2009 09:28Metamorphoser

I felt like I was with you..nice

April 27, 2009 02:28marsha

really good, I liked this