The letters I meant to write but never did

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By lost the lonely dead •

its one of those moments...wonder no loves nor cares...convince faults colide...restless a thud echos in an empty carcus...heartless a place to wander...life heaven's reward of death...home worried and desperate...mom im sorry these were the letters i meant to write...but never did

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May 9, 2006 23:13Faith

An interesting structure, and beautiful imagery. Makes me wonder about the story behind it...

May 10, 2006 17:37lost the lonely dead

it would be hard to tell with any measure of accuracy since for me it speaks of past present and future of pain and sorrow and of making amends, at least for my own "sanity" i dont know why i chose to write it the way i did

October 7, 2006 22:18Loneliness is condescending

i like the idea of this poem i like ' heaven's reward of death... home' but i dont think 'no loves nor cares... covince' fits into it i think its the word 'covince'

October 8, 2006 04:45lost the lonely dead

id like to work on it thanks for the feedback