The letters I meant to write but never did, by lost the lonely dead
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its one of those moments...wonder
no loves nor cares...convince
faults colide...restless
a thud echos in an empty carcus...heartless
a place to wander...life
heaven's reward of death...home
worried and desperate...mom
im sorry these were the letters i meant to write...but never
did |
| Posted: 2006-05-09 20:39:06 UTC |
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| 2006-05-09 23:13:05 | Faith |
| An interesting structure, and beautiful imagery. Makes me wonder about the story behind it... |
| 2006-05-10 17:37:36 | lost the lonely dead |
| it would be hard to tell with any measure of accuracy since for me it speaks of past present and future of pain and sorrow and of making amends, at least for my own "sanity" i dont know why i chose to write it the way i did |
| 2006-10-07 22:18:59 | Loneliness is condescending |
| i like the idea of this poem i like ' heaven's reward of death... home' but i dont think 'no loves nor cares... covince' fits into it i think its the word 'covince' |