Nothings right (I need you)

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By Luke

nothings right in the world or in my head i can see it only going wrong like a black veil over my eyes shrouding me in eternity of lost.. struggle no light i need you oh i need you what can i do im feel like a smudge on a window pain everyones looking through me i just can't be seen like boy in the corner i cry no ones with me i want you oh yes i want you back again keep your eyes closed an think of me you were everything that was right you were the only thing that was right a young girl cries at news shes heard someones always crying someones always hurt but theres more to life then this count your blessings put your eggs in one basket is it worth the pain we can all help eachother we're all the same i remember your smile an how it made me feel like rush on a roll coaster your lips on mine i know you wonder about how i am i wonder about you we thought it would last and it should i coming back for you keep your eyes closed an think of me you were everything that was right you were the only thing that was right Copy Right. Luke Never ever let someone slip away tell them how you really feel, always be true to your heart.. But easier said then done i'm happy for those who do.. true love an bravery are hand in hand.

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May 9, 2006 23:18Faith

This poem resounds with truth...

May 10, 2006 13:42XRebzX

wow wow wow! Luke that's absolutely beautiful! Amazing i love it:)

Rebz x

January 6, 2007 17:34BananaIceCream

true love and bravery are hand in hand...that last bit especially is so true!