Tide

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By honesty_kills

shes lost again diving straight into the deep end too far under for anyone to save taken away from her friends by an evil wave an undertow so strong that she can only destroy. grey skies hang over a lonely sandy beach as we all watch sadly helplessly as the tide kidnaps one of our own and steals her away. we cannot swim that fast to her side nor are our lifejackets strong enough not even a lifeguard can rescue her. she can only rescue herself. we can no longer reach her hands shes too far down too deep for us to go we cannot leave the safety of these shallow waters or else we will become a victim of the tide. **come back to us michelle.**

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March 3, 2005 10:49My_pain_your_thrill

I really like it, its so deep, and there is ambiguity about it.

March 3, 2005 22:04honesty_kills

thanks :)