My Pain

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By XRebzX

Searching for answers, mind is blank Only remembering how my heart sank Halfway there, my glass is full I feel a weight, a nasty pull Nothing goes right, gets snatched away This is my life, another day No-one knows how I'm feeling inside I try to show it, but instead i hide Crazy feelings and life's a test I'm only 18, haven't seen the best I ask the questions, can't sleep at night I'm alone with this; my pain, my fight Trying so hard but, what follows this? A life of happiness? a life of bliss? Can't get hopes up, but dreams won't fade In a year I'll look back at this poem I made Copyright Rebecca Waring

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May 29, 2006 21:12Crimson.Wings

OK... I'm not quite sure what I think about this yet. I can't really tell what the problem was that pulled you down, but it sounds like it was painful.

June 7, 2006 03:17Faith

I love it! Wow.