By turquoise petals •
Current vote: 6.0 / 5
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2? could you please leave feedback if you're going to leave such a crappy rating
nevermind,i obviously cant take critisicm.
This is a good poem (and I'm not just saying that!) Your work is good.
I can't believe someone gave this a 2! I guess some people can't see how flawlessly you manage to paint a picture that eliminates the need for so many words. To me that is one of the hardest and most rewarding ways to write poetry, and I think you do it wonderfully.
tht is sooooooooooo nice and beautiful
like someone said i can imagine a picture of this in my mind, and its so nice and soft if you get what i mean? anyway well done... x