My World, by Awakening Me
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Your world is as big as you make it.
You can expand your horizon
Or make it shrivel and wizen
It's up to you
Your world is as big as you make it.
YOU must begin
It's time to dig in
To the frozen sundae of life!
Your world is as big as you make it.
Play it by ear!
Shed a few tears!
Finish your story!
Feel the power and glory!
You'll have expeirenced it all
If you can truly say
"I made my world as big as I could make it."
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| Posted: 2007-12-12 22:18:40 UTC |
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| 2006-05-22 00:31:27 | A Lonely Song |
| Wow, I really love this Corri. Awesome job. It took me a while to read it though because I also had you singing "In the Rough" in my ear. I just had to take my cell phone away for a few seconds. Haha. I love you! |
| 2006-06-06 21:20:27 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| I agree with a lonely song, this is a fantastic piece of work it really is awesome. I was just wondering if I could copy it out and stick inside my planner to remind my world is what I make it. |
| 2006-06-10 18:25:04 | A Lonely Song |
| Hey Kirsty. Corrine hasn't been on in a while, but I'll call her and let her know you commented. I'm sure she wouldn't mind if you put the poem in you planner. She'll probably be very flattered. I know I would. (Corri and I are quite similar.) I'll tell her to reply to you as soon as possible. Keep writing! |
| 2006-06-29 03:56:26 | Awakening Me |
| I don't mind Kristy I would be flattered! |
| 2006-07-03 23:36:08 | |
| Hi! I really liked and agreed with this poem. It really shows some truth. Choices create your future. That's why people should learn to choose wisely and think before they act! Also, it was very well expressed and from the heart! P.S. I have a German Shepherd too! Love,
Me |
| 2006-08-24 02:36:57 | User |
| Awesome poem...short and nice.. |
| 2008-01-06 21:55:04 | .:side:walk:. |
| This is nice and playful. It's very inspiring! |
| 2008-01-25 22:28:52 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| One of my most favorite quotes is "It's my life, and I'm taking a stand!" And I absolutely love this poem for how well you have expressed what that means to me!!! |
| 2010-01-16 18:04:48 | coby |
| ok i love this chills |