Enigma (riddle poem), by Faith
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I am cradled in your arms
Safe from the harms
Of the world
The wind lulls me to sleep
There dreams will meet
As my vision becomes blurred
I feel secure and protected
Never to be rejected
In your unmoving arms
You embrace me for who i am
And surrounded by you i can
Give in to your charms
You carry me so high
I could touch the sky
If i wanted to
You are strong yet soothing
And never moving
From your place in my youth
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| Posted: 2006-09-27 15:09:52 UTC |
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| 2006-06-21 06:54:43 | User |
| Let me guess..?? Is this about someone you love and has cared for you for many years..?? Just guessing your riddle.. |
| 2006-08-21 02:42:12 | A Lonely Song |
| Great job. You wrote this beautifully. Keep writing!
Thank you for your comments on my poetry. |
| 2006-09-18 01:24:09 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| I like this poem Faith, it seemed to be written about God, until I reached the word "Charms"...written about God ?or about a first love from childhood? I even thought possibly about your Father/ whomever it is about, this is a great poem! GLO |
| 2006-09-18 20:07:54 | Faith |
| Well, i will give you a hint: it is not a person, or God, it is a thing. BUT the thing is alive... |
| 2006-09-25 03:53:54 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| well I suppose it could be Peace. I would say Love , but No... for God is Love. (smiles) |