Enigma (riddle poem)

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By <font color=crimson>Faith •

<font size=2> I am cradled in your arms Safe from the harms Of the world The wind lulls me to sleep There dreams will meet As my vision becomes blurred I feel secure and protected Never to be rejected In your unmoving arms You embrace me for who i am And surrounded by you i can Give in to your charms You carry me so high I could touch the sky If i wanted to You are strong yet soothing And never moving From your place in my youth ©2004

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June 21, 2006 06:54User

Let me guess..?? Is this about someone you love and has cared for you for many years..?? Just guessing your riddle..

August 21, 2006 02:42A Lonely Song

Great job. You wrote this beautifully. Keep writing!
Thank you for your comments on my poetry.

September 18, 2006 01:24 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I like this poem Faith, it seemed to be written about God, until I reached the word "Charms"...written about God ?or about a first love from childhood? I even thought possibly about your Father/ whomever it is about, this is a great poem! GLO

September 18, 2006 20:07Faith

Well, i will give you a hint: it is not a person, or God, it is a thing. BUT the thing is alive...

September 25, 2006 03:53 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

well I suppose it could be Peace. I would say Love , but No... for God is Love. (smiles)