8:27pm

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By bedazzled

My addiction to you seems okay Until I miss my daily fix Staring at a blank screen Silently falling to bits Feeling assurance crumble easily Like sedimentary rock I sit, I wait, I hope Just staring at the clock 8:20pm I guess I'm sulking But it feels deeper than that I'm craving talking to you But are you wanting it back? I guess I'll just paint my thoughts black And watch the time defrost 8:21pm Slouched and pouting My hands are numb Only you can you make me feel So incredibly dumb The one thing I feared Seems to have occurred I've given you power The numbers are blurred 8:24pm How much more time until I give up? How much more before I break? I guess that it's all my fault For offering you my heart to take I'm still here internally bleeding Feelings can be so misleading Because I thought it was true That you were offering your heart too 8:26pm Sullenly staring Hardly able to move If this is a fight I'm about to lose Guess it won't happen I guess I should go Instead of waiting For your hello 8:27pm.

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June 28, 2006 14:04Rachel

Wow...that's amazing. You've voiced the agony of the "Lover's Leap" in a way that I'm envious I didn't come up with. that's so beautiful.

July 6, 2006 00:59 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

This is such a cute and sweet poem, but 'real love' .. will possibly wait for more than 7 minutes! lol :) I know it's poetry and a good one at that! good job! smiles