No One Knows

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By A Lonely Song

I AM TERRIBLY SORRY FOR THE CRAPPINESS OF THIS. I WAS VERY SLEEP DEPRIVED WHEN I WROTE THIS. I JUST FIGURED I'D POST IT FOR THE HECK OF IT. xoxo courtney You and me I wish it could be that perfect Can't you see How each time I crumble when you don't notice me In a world where love is thought of as simple You smile fully with that tiny dimple You have my heart. Will you take it? You have my heart. With one move you can break it. No one knows The way you make me feel No one knows And I can't find a way To tell you And I can't find a way To show you Each and every day I can only admire you from a far I can only admire you when we're apart I distance Myself from you I listen To other people's truths About how you are and how you feel My resistance could never be more real You make me complete Can't you feel it? You make me complete Can't you see it? No one knows The way you make me feel No one knows And I can't find a way To tell you And I can't find a way To show you Each and every day I can only admire you from a far I can only admire you when we're apart And maybe I should just give up and give in When no matter how hard I try I will never win Oh Lord, my love is strong Oh Lord, will it take long? To find a way To tell him And to find a way To show him Each and every day I can only admire him from a far I can only admire him when we're apart

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June 26, 2006 04:57User

Hey..really amazing that you can write something like this in that state of mind..

July 8, 2006 18:52A Lonely Song

Wow. Thank you so much. Geez, I'm really bad at this compliment thing. I'm not used to it. Haha.

July 22, 2006 22:15Crimson.Wings

I think this would make a good song. I don't know how the tune or melody or whatever would be, but it'd probably make a good song. :)

July 23, 2006 18:52A Lonely Song

Yeah, I wrote it as a song. I have poems and songs here. Sorry, if I didn't make that clear. Thanks so much for the comment! I means a lot to me.

July 28, 2006 08:58Unknown

I'm serioudly sleep deprived now, so to a seriously deprived person, it's very good! Anna Nalick is awesome btw

September 9, 2006 16:47 *****Junior Walker*****

Great poem,my favourite I've read so far

September 25, 2007 18:32~Stay_Beautiful~20104

Even before reading the other comments, I agree, this would be a really good song! I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this! And hey, no shame, I get some of my best ideas for poems when I'm sleep deproved too! :) Great Poems!

November 26, 2007 11:32blackmagicwoman

i really like this poem.i'm gonna try to write one when i'm sleep deprived and see if i can do half a good job!

November 26, 2007 11:33blackmagicwoman

i really like this poem.i'm gonna try to write one when i'm sleep deprived and see if i can do half a good job!

December 24, 2007 01:46Awakening Me

Even sleep deprived, you are still amazing!

February 9, 2014 21:13pat

Yooo definitely great lyrics Courtney.
I can almost hear it being sung with piano or something. Idk. Great job!
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