*Pain, love and writing* (5)

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By *****Junior Walker*****

There are certain songs I still can’t listen to, Previous favourites of mine But they remind me too much of you I don’t walk near your house So I never have to see you And have those blue eyes pierce my heart It’s insane the changes you’ve put me through Little did I know when you pulled us apart That my heart was sewn to yours My heart was torn in two And for that there are no cures What could nullify each feeling and memory And leave no past love or present pain? Everything that used to matter matters no more But I’d sell my soul to be with you again Because you were the one person- I wanted to be with To have you look at me how you used to There’s nothing I wouldn’t give To get rid of the pain Of one heart in two places fighting To get rid of the pain in my soul And the pain in my breath and writing

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September 7, 2006 20:22A Lonely Song

Wow were you two together long? I don't mean to pry or anything. Your heart seems really broken. If it makes you feel any better, your writing is amazing. You're definitely one of my favorites on here.

September 9, 2006 16:31 *****Junior Walker*****

thanx for them words,makes me smile knowing I can have my personal problems in a form where people can find some joy in it and pass that joy onto me,thanx

September 25, 2006 18:36Dimplegirl

its true you are brilliant ^_^

September 30, 2006 14:39 *****Junior Walker*****

brilliant lol thanx,i been reading your stuff too,your brill aswell,tnx for the comments

March 6, 2007 09:06User

Wow..it sounds very sad to me,but I like the way it is expressed here,this is a very good piece indeed..