Solace

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By <font color=crimson>Faith

<font size=2> You fold your arms around me and I feel my frame melting into yours like the missing pieces of a puzzle and one heart beats for two. I am crashing into you-- a falling star towards the earth-- yet with tender delicacy you gather me in your arms and keep me from falling apart. It is your hands encircling my waist that are holding me together, keeping my soul from reaching out towards the heat of you; from soaring across the sky and blazing to the ground. You render me speechless, breathless, yet with one flickering glance all is laid bare and with every breath you take I learn to breathe again. Never before have I felt so close to God as when you pull me to your heart. ©2006

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August 11, 2006 16:24Faith

--Written Wed, August 9th, 2006--

August 12, 2006 17:32 Kirsty (living in the light)

i guess this symbolises jesus, thankyou for commenting on my poems i noticed you didnt say anything about me self harming, which is interesting hey faith whats ur email? if u can let me know that would be cool, oh and i gave my life to christ again this week, although i am still self harming and trying to give up love you always kirsty

September 1, 2006 02:55User

Well..I am no Christian but I didn't know it is about Jesus until the very last sentence..sounds a lot like a description of being in the warm embrace of your true love..but anyhow..I
love this poem so much...feeling so warm inside...well done..!!!!!!!

September 1, 2006 14:48Brooke

THATS WHATS UP!!!!!

September 4, 2006 22:11 *****Junior Walker*****

like the warm feeling this poem gives,so often I have to look up word after reading your stuff though,learnt a new word...solace

September 18, 2006 01:15 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

well done!:)

October 9, 2006 04:30lost the lonely dead

like it, and it is good but i think the begining is a bit choppy somehow, it seems to start and stop a bit but still the poem is great, sorry havent commented in awhile ive just been busy, keep up the awesome writing

November 8, 2006 08:23[c a s a n d r a]

omg that was amazing. :]