sheltered, by lost the lonely dead
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censored security
deprived liberty
and degraded sensiblity
embed a sense of morality
and then you have shelter
shelter from all that is sane, rational, or real
and there there we find him
slouched
waiting
watching
waiting
one day the walls will fall down
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| Posted: 2006-08-13 04:17:25 UTC |
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| 2006-08-13 04:30:42 | lost the lonely dead |
| i rushed it but ill run it by you another time when i mutilate it some more |
| 2006-08-29 19:19:44 | Faith |
| Interesting... i like the way you did this. |
| 2006-09-08 04:57:27 | lost the lonely dead |
| well its kinda short i wanna embellish it some maybe give it more....meat somehow its a good start i suppose thanks for the comments |