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By lost the lonely dead •

censored security deprived liberty and degraded sensiblity embed a sense of morality and then you have shelter shelter from all that is sane, rational, or real and there there we find him slouched waiting watching waiting one day the walls will fall down

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August 13, 2006 04:28Loneliness is condescending

neeeeh its good but i'm not sure i'm super into it somethings missing

August 13, 2006 04:30lost the lonely dead

i rushed it but ill run it by you another time when i mutilate it some more

August 29, 2006 19:19Faith

Interesting... i like the way you did this.

September 8, 2006 04:57lost the lonely dead

well its kinda short i wanna embellish it some maybe give it more....meat somehow its a good start i suppose thanks for the comments