Flickering Florescent

By sharonrenee •
By sharonrenee •
Current vote: 8.0 / 5
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haha... I'm worried if this is what I'll be reduced to in school. Writing poems about lights or things equally unimportant. I still like this poem though. It appeals to my strange sense of humor.
.,.,.,get it a new starter motor :)
complain at the janitor...
or stand on a chair.,.,and twist the lil starter fuse..thingy...thing
I have definitely felt this way before..so I can totally relate but I guess most teens or students can as well. Makes me think back of my days in high school! Good poem!
I like this poem. It is close enough to perfection. It has nice flow. Only it lacks of details, and tension. If you add them to it I'm sure it will be perfectly perfect. (You said you want constructive comments to prevent egoistic poet, so here's one.)