Tormented Rain (2)

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By *****Junior Walker*****

Rain beats against my window As I awake to a distressed call I open my window getting raindrops on myself And see a girl being pounded by the heavy rain Standing there outside my window All the time being torn apart by a wailing wind I can’t stop the rain so I tell her to come inside She declines not wanting to bother me with her troubles And as she says those words the rain grows heavier Tornados spin around her shrieking and howling Causing rivers to burst banks and overflow As the wails fill my ears I beg her to come inside She finds comfort on the floor and hugs her knees Waiting for an end to the rain I do the same I hold her against my chest Both of us drenched from the rain Whispering what sweetness I can in her ear. Over her head I see the winds outside calming down Lifting up her chin I see beauty restored all around I see smiles as the sun breaks in from outside Looking in her eyes I see the rivers glisten I stand up and look at the beauty in my presence in awe And the calm which has presented itself Not a word, not a sound She rises to her feet and closes the window Then ushers me to the bed I so recently awoke from As I feel myself falling into dreams with tender calls

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September 23, 2006 18:55Dimplegirl

what a sweet lovely poem.. you are a kind person

September 29, 2006 21:14 *****Junior Walker*****

ahh,u called me kind lol,this was a lil poem about me girlfriend crying,holding back the tears,the tears overflowing,then her being happy afterwards,thought it would be good jazzed up in poetry form and this is what came out,thanks for the coment