black water, by tink
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shattered pieces of an existence once beautiful
sink to the bottom of the ocean surrounding me
slipping from sight into the black depths
of the icy reality taking hold
nothing to hold on to
no one to lift me out
all on my own
strivng for an existence I once knew
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| Posted: 2005-03-03 11:23:44 UTC |
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| 2005-03-10 12:53:48 | My_pain_your_thrill |
| this is a really nice poem, creative and deep, i like it |