White lilies and bruised purple roses

By Lob •
By Lob •
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I love it. This is so good. Not to pry, but it seems like a loved one died. Is it that, or is it kneeling at the grave of a lost love? Hm.....
Beautiful. I really enjoyed this poem.
good poem i like it... I have a poem that talks about my mom and dying its called "Cynical Thoughts" check it out when you get the chance
interesting
kinda sad but good poem
I liked it. The poem manages to convey a feeling of immense pain within the protagonist, that's such a high level of emotional pain it's actually become physical. Excellent job.
Great job! it is really sad when someone we love dies. I think you did a really good job of conveying that feeling.