a love gone away

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By Dimplegirl

a love i had once was blue untill the day that i met you we loved each other with all our hearts hoping that we will never part days and nights we spent together months and years through all the weathers you loved me through the good times and bad i loved you too with all i had you were always there to cheer me up yet still you thought it wasnt enough times when im sad and cried you always stay right by my side you never leave me in alone at night kept me close by near your sight times when we had to spend apart we called each other on the phone non stopped never a moment that i was ever blue staying by right closed to you but how did all of this have to end a love that we had so true in the begin why is it that our love not meant to be i cant get over the fact that we cant be toghether for eternity was it me that did you wrong or was it you who mess it up all along then why did we have to get married and swear in front of church to mary now that we both must move on i dont know if i can hold on if i dont ever see you again then i wont know if you are happy in the end maybe cause ive been to selfish didnt think about your feelings always left you alone in the dark leaving painful marks on your kind heart

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September 23, 2006 14:45 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

good story in the poem with feeling to back it up. thr rhyme and rhythem are well done too! Keep writing ! :)

September 25, 2006 17:37 *****Junior Walker*****

my favourite of your poems,liked it alot,good poem