A misted window, by Lob Subscribe to rss feed for Lob

I looked out of a misted window,
The glass covered with tiny drops of water,
I remember it wasn’t raining that day,
Id cried until my head just fell and rested on the glass,
The tears rolled from my eyes and hit the cold hard surface
My breath so warm the window clouded
How could this hurt so much?

I looked out of the misted window,
My eyes now dry and sore from staring,
You never came that day,
Although I wished and hoped you’d come back,
There was no point in pleading coz u didn’t want to,
Ill never regret the day I cried for something that wasn’t
coming.

Posted: 2005-01-03 17:03:13 UTC

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2005-03-18 13:55:40queen of melodrama
your writing is painfully beautiful....

2005-04-14 17:18:30My_pain_your_thrill
This is so touching. I love the last line. You're a great writer.

2005-06-25 19:35:58ZeTz_Darke
Very beautiful. All of your poetry is excellent.

2005-08-16 13:09:33kelly
wow! i love the last line to! it's really touching!

2006-02-17 05:26:35I'm The Girl That Holds Everything Inside
This is a beautiful poem...I think everyone feels like this at least once in there life and you did a very nice job of expressing it.

2006-08-28 22:38:41.:side:walk:.
pretty speachless of this! Amazing!

2007-06-22 23:11:27Shattered Mirror
sadness seems to make the most beautiful poems

2007-11-11 03:04:23Shattered Mirror
awe-inspiring its so beautiful

2007-12-02 01:25:22Simply-Me-20104
Wow! This is great! And very expressive! I love how there is the hidden story behind it all!

2008-05-20 13:59:23ray!
I love the way you express your emotions. I want to say I understand but I can't say that for sure can I? Love is different for everyone.

2009-05-03 20:03:37...
I love this, it's so honest and real. The last line... wow! Just wow!