A misted window

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By Lob

I looked out of a misted window, The glass covered with tiny drops of water, I remember it wasn’t raining that day, Id cried until my head just fell and rested on the glass, The tears rolled from my eyes and hit the cold hard surface My breath so warm the window clouded How could this hurt so much? I looked out of the misted window, My eyes now dry and sore from staring, You never came that day, Although I wished and hoped you’d come back, There was no point in pleading coz u didn’t want to, Ill never regret the day I cried for something that wasn’t coming.

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March 18, 2005 13:55queen of melodrama

your writing is painfully beautiful....

April 14, 2005 17:18My_pain_your_thrill

This is so touching. I love the last line. You're a great writer.

June 25, 2005 19:35ZeTz_Darke

Very beautiful. All of your poetry is excellent.

August 16, 2005 13:09kelly

wow! i love the last line to! it's really touching!

This is a beautiful poem...I think everyone feels like this at least once in there life and you did a very nice job of expressing it.

August 28, 2006 22:38.:side:walk:.

pretty speachless of this! Amazing!

June 22, 2007 23:11Shattered Mirror

sadness seems to make the most beautiful poems

November 11, 2007 03:04Shattered Mirror

awe-inspiring its so beautiful

December 2, 2007 01:25Simply-Me-20104

Wow! This is great! And very expressive! I love how there is the hidden story behind it all!

May 20, 2008 13:59ray!

I love the way you express your emotions. I want to say I understand but I can't say that for sure can I? Love is different for everyone.

May 3, 2009 20:03...

I love this, it's so honest and real. The last line... wow! Just wow!