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By ~Stay_Beautiful~20104

I just thought it would be fun to do this, all you have to so, is leave a line of poetry(or as many as you want) and I will add it to this poem! This can be an extremely awesome poem... but I need YOU to help me out! :) When darkness creeps into one's life, with excruciating pain and vehement strife. There's hope to find a better way, if we just walk another day. All will come, in due time. Even in this rhyme To find ourselves in light again Never look back at the pain again, it seems so hard to do but in the end it becomes of what you want it Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves that glorifies the true purpose of life For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the tinkling tune of a fife. believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a knife WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future. A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's Living above a selfish Hate! A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight Credit to: When darkness creeps into one's life, with excruciating pain and vehement strife. There's hope to find a better way, if we just walk another day. (Glostarg) All will come, in due time. (Julieeee) Even in this rhyme (anna) To find ourselves in light again (liberty moon) Never look back at the pain again, it seems so hard to do but in the end it becomes of what you want it to (Insanity of Ones Self (your comments are greatly appreciated)) Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves that glorifies the true purpose of life (Expressive Child) For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the tinkling tune of a fife. (Kicon) believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a knife (Smiling Darkness) WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future. (true poet) A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's Living above a selfish Hate! (CAPRISTAR) A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight (Invisible Poet)

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November 6, 2006 15:19 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

When darkness creeps into one's life,with excruciating pain and vehement strife.
There's hope to find a better way, if we just walk another day.

June 12, 2007 06:36*Psychopathic Child*

never look back at the pain again, it seems so hard to do but in the end it becomes of what you want it to

February 10, 2008 17:12true_poet

WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.

February 14, 2008 21:37true_poet

Hey thankz for the comment you and daydreamBeliever are the only ones that comment..Does it take that long?? Lolz Check out my poem ''Change''

February 23, 2008 16:26 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and Love,
My friend's it's not too Late.
A Life that WILL's it's Living above a selfish Hate!

March 21, 2008 07:03Invisible Poet

A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight