NO NAME, by ♥Just Sam♥
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I'll paint a pretty picture
I'll paint it with my tears
I'll paint the pretty picture
I've been dreaming up these years
I'll write a lovely story
I'll write it with my blood
I'll write the lovely story
Of my tears that caused a flood
I'll sing a hardy anthem
I'll sing it with my screams
I'll sing the hardy anthem
Of my sadly shattered dreams
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| Posted: 2007-01-30 20:53:23 UTC |
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| 2007-06-11 20:49:57 | Angel of Music |
| Wow this poem is filled near to bursting with emotion! if this is anything like the rest of your work than you are a truly talented author. well, I am off to read the rest of your work. |
| 2008-02-14 07:57:48 | Invisible Poet |
| now i am really starting to see what you meant |
| 2010-04-09 01:31:38 | baya |
| hmmm . . . well srry gotta break your heart . . . this soudns like a 4th grader wrote this . . . very rhymie and veyr cheesy indeed . . . i dont understand the point and there is no emotion i see and its very flashy in white . . . i mean really "I'll paint pretty pictures" . . . goodness i do see some good with the blood and tears so are you cheery or morose . . . uhh |