its fury

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By liberty moon •

does ur shedding of my blood bring u joy? does it please u 2 c me squirm? salty waters speak of of treacherous youth. bloody hands speak of stolen smiles. reality screams of shattered dreams. i've died, seen heaven, come back and lived in a hell created in my own mind. i've died by my own hands. a mass murder of a discreet kind. i've seem an evil in my heart that no man can fathom. its fury sets all ablaze. its fury is my home its fury has bound me. its fury. FURY

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January 7, 2007 12:04BananaIceCream

this is really powerful, i love the line 'i've died by my own hands'

January 9, 2007 17:21liberty moon

thank u!

March 13, 2007 17:27~*PuRely*DeVine*~

oh my, this is another beautiful one!

September 17, 2007 19:51Sarah

I like this poem there is a lot of emotion in it. and thanks for the comment.

July 1, 2009 21:59~*~Crimson Bladez~*~

this was like realy awesome i loved it!!

August 26, 2009 04:41Chalan

I really liked how it was written. I love how the reader can feel the power of your emotions in the poem.
Thank you for your comments on my poem.