its fury, by liberty moon
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does ur shedding of my blood bring u joy?
does it please u 2 c me squirm?
salty waters speak of of treacherous youth.
bloody hands speak of stolen smiles. reality screams of
shattered dreams.
i've died, seen heaven, come back and lived in a hell
created in my own mind.
i've died by my own hands. a mass murder of a discreet
kind.
i've seem an evil in my heart that no man can fathom.
its fury sets all ablaze.
its fury is my home
its fury has bound me.
its fury.
FURY |
| Posted: 2007-07-18 14:50:06 UTC |
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| 2007-01-07 12:04:37 | BananaIceCream |
| this is really powerful, i love the line 'i've died by my own hands' |
| 2007-09-17 19:51:12 | Sarah |
| I like this poem there is a lot of emotion in it. and thanks for the comment. |
| 2009-08-26 04:41:19 | Chalan |
| I really liked how it was written. I love how the reader can feel the power of your emotions in the poem.
Thank you for your comments on my poem. |