Tell Me Why

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By Chalan

My heart has began to melt. I'm feeling emotions that I never before felt. I'm in all new territory and I'm about to write a new chapter in my life's story. But then there is an awful twist For there is another whom you have kissed. Your love for her is beginning to unfold and she is the one you want to hold. Tell me why it can't be me. Tell me why I have to live with this agony. Now my love has been revealed and you know exactly how I feel. I held my heart out in my hand. Tell me why you can't understand? I took a chance for you and now because of her we're through. Chalan

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January 16, 2007 17:50BananaIceCream

that's really good, v heartfelt

February 10, 2007 18:14Lil'Fighter

You write good poetry. Good Job! I look forward to reading more of your work.

February 13, 2007 17:01Lil'Fighter

Thanks for your comments to my poems! I appreciate them. Your poetry is brilliant! I love it! You have a talent! Great Job!

December 19, 2008 07:14LostSoul

Thank you for the comment. I can relate to this poem very well.

May 14, 2009 23:50*Psychopathic Child*

this poem is full of heartfelt feelings, that make the poem burst your emotions. Very well written poem. Amazing.

October 12, 2009 00:22Lovecrafter

thanks for the comment...you are great if better.