my nightmare©

By sk8t3R gal 4 eva • May 22, 2007 04:02 UTC

this is the story about my friend, hope you like the end. i loved him but he didn't love me back, now i'm alone in this lil' old shack. he left with my friend, WAIT! this is not the end!!! crying puddles broken hearts but that is really not the start. my friend betrayed me, now she'll pay! thats all i really have to say. now goodbye my friends for this is the END!!!

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January 19, 2007 01:25 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I like the end.lol but the poem is overall a good one too.
:)
the rhyme and rhythm are good and it works for this poem. good job! glo

January 20, 2007 17:15sk8t3R gal 4 eva

thank you *G*l*o*s*t*a*r*g*