my nightmare©, by sk8t3R gal 4 eva
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this is the story about my friend, hope you like the end.
i loved him but he didn't love me back, now i'm alone in
this lil' old shack.
he left with my friend, WAIT! this is not the end!!!
crying puddles
broken hearts
but that is really not the start.
my friend betrayed me, now she'll pay!
thats all i really have to say.
now goodbye my friends
for this is the END!!! |
| Posted: 2007-05-22 04:02:17 UTC |
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| 2007-01-19 01:25:12 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| I like the end.lol but the poem is overall a good one too.
:)
the rhyme and rhythm are good and it works for this poem. good job! glo
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