still un-dead ( prt.1)©

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By sk8t3R gal 4 eva •

sitting here on the floor, tears seeping down my face. the blade beside me on the ground, puts death in my place. im waiting, but nothing happens so i try it again, just once more. finally i try again, oh no! my vain it tore! i yell to the heavens, "please take me away!" but still im here not dead, so to jesus i say, " help me lord, please just let me die!" i squeezed the place the blade has cut, trying not to cry. i realized what i have done as i look down and see the blood. it lands down on the floor just like really thick red mud. the pain is just to agonizing, please just let me die in bed! but i see know that i suffer knowing i'm still un-dead!! no copywriting!!! i wrote it!! ©copyright 2007 melissa

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January 1, 2007 21:57sk8t3R gal 4 eva

sitting here looking at my own poem, i cant belive i really wrote it!

January 20, 2007 17:12sk8t3R gal 4 eva

hi

January 28, 2007 19:39liberty moon

well if u felt it then its yours, we can fix the pains of life on our own. this poem touched me thank-you

May 14, 2007 14:50liberty moon

i read it again and i'm glad ur alive... i heard this once and i want to share it with u. "a rose only becomes perfume when u crush it, totally crush it" allow God to get u through life's crushing