Gives me chills, by .:side:walk:.
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desperate to here their tainted melody
to drench in their own treachery
fraught without their false noise
in belief, it structures my poise
it's all in my head
their frames following me
my only friends
to sheild me from outside
the shadow casts their faces
no one but I can see them
their shadowed voices
soft and loud whispers
gives me chills
I only believe what they say
because everyone wants to go in a certain way
trying to go in my path
trying to ignore and drown them out
I'll figure out this story and figure what it's about
© since 2007
- 2008 and present
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Posted: 2008-01-04 20:50:30 UTC |
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2007-06-03 00:13:52 | Angel of Music |
beautiful. if you dont mind a little advise.... if you are going to rhyme a poem then rhyme it all, it gives the poem better flow. Same goes for non-rhyming poems. Keep up the good work! |