Gives me chills

RSS

By .:side:walk:. •

desperate to here their tainted melody to drench in their own treachery fraught without their false noise in belief, it structures my poise it's all in my head their frames following me my only friends to sheild me from outside the shadow casts their faces no one but I can see them their shadowed voices soft and loud whispers gives me chills I only believe what they say because everyone wants to go in a certain way trying to go in my path trying to ignore and drown them out I'll figure out this story and figure what it's about © since 2007 - 2008 and present

This poem has no votes yet.

To vote, you must be logged in.

To leave comments, you must be logged in.

June 3, 2007 00:13Angel of Music

beautiful. if you dont mind a little advise.... if you are going to rhyme a poem then rhyme it all, it gives the poem better flow. Same goes for non-rhyming poems. Keep up the good work!