facade/ inner conflict

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By liberty moon •

curtain call its show time. razzle dazzle'em with your acting skills. feel me, touch me just a figment of ur reality. a product of ur immaturity. applause they believe u. now do u hear me? i'm screaming inside u, tearing u apart with my flow of poison. break a leg! no really break a leg! feel ur crowd they beckon for more. cry! no smile its what they like. be still! no give them a show they'll never forget. be weak! no strength its what they demand. sleep! no wake the show must go on. bang curtain call the show is over their gone. cry! yes its safe. be still! yes, He is God, they already forgot. be weak yes He is strong. sleep! yes the one that watches over u never tires. they all had enough have u had enough? bang shows over its only u. HAVE YOU HAD ENOUGH?

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January 10, 2007 21:13liberty moon

please read and give an honest opinion. wot did it make u feel

January 12, 2007 23:08fallén

it's not standing like a poem format and i believe that poems needs care...

January 16, 2007 21:12BananaIceCream

the most important thing about a poem is you're expressing your feelings, and you really are here. this is a really good, heartfelt poem. :)

February 5, 2007 01:40 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I really, really love this poem! It is so true! Seems like so many people live a facade life, a facade smile and trying to make things work one way and forgetting that, "It Is Written" by the Author and finisher of our Faith! I really like the last lines in your poem, for I believe that will be how it is in our lives, when the show is over and that curtain falls will you be ready for what shows up next? Awesome poem you have written. love it! God Bless You. Glostarg

February 13, 2007 16:28 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi I have to let you know that this poem you have written here has inspired me to write another poem. The name of it is "The All". I would be honored if you read it, for it is your poem that inspired mine. God Bless You! Glostarg

September 10, 2007 19:34 xbeautifully_brokenx

i cant describe how this makes me feel, its interesting though and a great poem. Erm... i do live in England, and i have recently stopped cutting