**A LOVE THAT WILL NEVER END!**, by **kaza94**
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A silver tear rolls down my cheek,
I cant help but feel so week,
My heart is crushed,
My head a rush,
When I look into your eyes,
I think of all the lies,
When you say goodbye,
I feel like I could die,
All I want is to kiss you,
But all my friends tell me to dismiss you,
I love you with all my heart,
And all you do is rip it apart. |
| Posted: 2007-01-12 17:00:09 UTC |
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| 2007-01-16 05:03:51 | Chalan |
| I can definitely relate to this poem! |
| 2007-01-21 00:02:39 | **kaza94** |
| Yh it was based on the way i felt after my boyfriend dumped me!!!!! |
| 2007-01-22 19:46:51 | Chalan |
| It reminds me of one of my very first poems that i had written it's about my first heart break you could read it if you want :) |
| 2007-02-10 18:16:50 | Lil'Fighter |
| I can relate! Great Poem. Good Job. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| 2007-02-16 19:40:37 | bex103 |
| hey u i love your poems! they make me so emotional!!! see you soon! |