Linger

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By Firec

With your arms around me I sit and wait for it is the loaded question that I anticipate. Will it always be so wonderful to sit here with you? I look up at your smile, my skies turn to blue. I think I will linger. You stroked my arm with your thumb, you made my heart beat fast like a drum. My world turned into a cork skrew, spinning, spinning all askew. I think this should linger. I have been warned against your ways and my love life has seen better days, but when I sit here and look up at you everything seems to bloom anew. I wish this would linger. Your arms are so warm around me I feel so safe and yet free. I am only waiting for your cue to change one and one into two. For this I will forever linger.

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January 16, 2007 05:06Chalan

Nicely Written

February 22, 2007 03:34Firec

thank you!

November 22, 2007 17:56Teresa

good job

November 30, 2007 01:42 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

very good! aa,bb,c good! rhythm and rhyme also good.emotions are very evident. well done.

December 6, 2007 17:38mytruth

Great poem!! I love the format and emotion in this poem :)

September 22, 2010 14:53Wingless

Such a warm piece, I can relate to this, I love it!