ROOM, by **kaza94** Subscribe to rss feed for **kaza94** 

Silence in a room,
Then suddenly with a boom,
You enter my heart,
Just to tear it apart,
I allow you to do it,
Take it bit by bit,
Untill im left alone,
My heart completly overthrown, 
I feel like im left to die,
Instead I just sit and cry.
Posted: 2007-01-16 18:30:39 UTC
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2007-01-19 02:41:35Chalan
Nicely written. It really expresses heartache to a "T"

2007-01-21 00:03:27**kaza94**
Thankyou!!!! it was just my feelings at the time !!!

2007-02-12 21:47:58Lil'Fighter
Brilliant keep up the good work.

2007-05-26 16:14:37liberty moon
i love this i can totally relate and thank u for the comment u left. it means i lot to have people read my poetry

2010-09-22 14:48:57Wingless
Really snappy, its quick and to the point, just like pain can be. Really good poem!