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By **kaza94** •

Silence in a room, Then suddenly with a boom, You enter my heart, Just to tear it apart, I allow you to do it, Take it bit by bit, Untill im left alone, My heart completly overthrown, I feel like im left to die, Instead I just sit and cry.

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January 19, 2007 02:41Chalan

Nicely written. It really expresses heartache to a "T"

January 21, 2007 00:03**kaza94**

Thankyou!!!! it was just my feelings at the time !!!

February 12, 2007 21:47Lil'Fighter

Brilliant keep up the good work.

May 26, 2007 16:14liberty moon

i love this i can totally relate and thank u for the comment u left. it means i lot to have people read my poetry

September 22, 2010 14:48Wingless

Really snappy, its quick and to the point, just like pain can be. Really good poem!