I'll Always Be Here

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By InLoveWithLoverBoy

Farewell to you and I I hope the good times never die 'Cuz I've already tried to keep them alive All this time Our lives will change Times will changes Our minds will change Our minutes together Will start to disappear But I'll always be here My love for you Is as gorgeous As an ocean is blue That's the way I feel about you So, I'll always be there for you No matter what you do I'll always be here No matter where you might go No matter where you have been No matter who you've talked to We'll always be friends Yeah We'll always be friends 'Cuz I'll always be here When you're floatin' away in the air With a balloon instead of your head When you yell and you think I might leave 'Cuz of the way you've been treating me LEAD SINGER: Think I'm gone yet? Nope, I'm still here. Riiight here. OTHER BAND MEMBER: Man, what a loser. LEAD SINGER: Hey, I heard that! OTHER BAND MEMBER: *starts singing slightly off key* I'LL ALWAYS BE HEREEEEEEE!!!! -END- ------ This is a song I might present to my band. It's not actually completed yet, but this is the most current version. It's basically about being friends with somebody, obviously. It's like when you feel like somebody's a really good friend and you just know that no matter what happens, no matter what they do, NOTHING can make you turn your back on them when they need you. They've always got your back and you've always got theirs. It's as simple as that. That little part with the lead singer and the other band member is just a part I threw in. I thought it would sorta be funny. If we ever record this song, I'd be glad to throw that in. Hehe. That part with the balloon, you know, "When you're floatin' away in the air with a balloon instead of your head." That's supposed to refer to when my friend was being an airhead. Haha. I think it gets the point across without being toooo harsh. What do you think? So, please, tell me what you think about the whole song. Give me the truth, I can take it. Just please don't be nasty, if you think it stinks. Just say, "It stinks." And telling me why would be nice, too. Haha. Thanks!

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January 24, 2007 17:40~*PuRely*DeVine*~

very nice good job :)

January 30, 2007 04:02Chalan

I think that will make a great song! because it's so relateable and really catchy

February 14, 2007 00:44Lil'Fighter

Great Job!

February 28, 2007 23:50.L.

good poem...turn it into a song...id buy a cd..lol

January 10, 2009 23:15Nobody's Child

I think its a good song,Yet I also think that by explaining all you have has taken something away from it, as Poems and most songs convey within enough for others to work out what is being said, if you have to do that for us to me means your not confident enough in your own writing.That is my honest opinion