Heart Break

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By Chalan

He phones you up to say he doesn't love you. You stare at the phone. You're numb, you can't speak, you can't think. You run outside to let your feelings of pain go. You stare at the moon and the stars, and you wonder how this can be so. First he tells you that he loves you, and you're beautiful. Then the next day he phones to say he can't see you. You lay your head on the bed and cry, till you think you're going to die. Slowly but surely this heart break will mend in time. Age: 15(written in 2000)

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January 25, 2007 20:49BananaIceCream

WOW. this really touches the heart!

January 27, 2007 17:11connie

this is really good :) oh i sent it to carl and he read it but didn't say anything to me so.. yea

March 13, 2007 03:31 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

sad, but well written poem. You seem to write from the heart. I Love your poetry.