I Love U

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By FarmGirl

My knees start to weaken At the first sight of your face My heart starts to melt At the thought of your embrace Your love flows through me Like a river flows down its path Your kiss lifts me up so high I could probably fall to my death I really wish that When I looked into your eyes I could see Exactly how it is that You feel about me I get nervous when you're around me I feel I could cry when you're away I dream about you constanly Every night and every day I want you to know My last three words will always remain true Regardless of what I may say or do You'll always know that I love you.

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February 16, 2007 01:10Lil'Fighter

Great Poem!

March 14, 2007 04:01Acushla

It's a really great poem but in the second last paragraph, the last two lines, I think it would be better if it went:
"I get nervous when you're around me
I feel I could cry when you're away
I dream about you CONSTANTLY
Every night and EVERY day"
That way it flows abit more..just a suggestion but still a really great poem =]

March 14, 2007 17:20BananaIceCream

great poem, i like your style of writing

June 5, 2007 11:32**kaza94**

this is reali good!!! well done!! i love your poetry! xx

September 2, 2007 15:35liberty moon

i think being in love is most amazing but also most confusing. gr8 poem... i'm in love and love catching myself smiling for no reason. again lovely poem