I Love U, by FarmGirl
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My knees start to weaken
At the first sight of your face
My heart starts to melt
At the thought of your embrace
Your love flows through me
Like a river flows down its path
Your kiss lifts me up so high
I could probably fall to my death
I really wish that
When I looked into your eyes I could see
Exactly how it is that
You feel about me
I get nervous when you're around me
I feel I could cry when you're away
I dream about you constanly
Every night and every day
I want you to know
My last three words will always remain true
Regardless of what I may say or do
You'll always know that
I love you. |
Posted: 2007-05-13 07:04:08 UTC |
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2007-03-14 04:01:42 | Acushla |
It's a really great poem but in the second last paragraph, the last two lines, I think it would be better if it went:
"I get nervous when you're around me
I feel I could cry when you're away
I dream about you CONSTANTLY
Every night and EVERY day"
That way it flows abit more..just a suggestion but still a really great poem =]
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2007-03-14 17:20:49 | BananaIceCream |
great poem, i like your style of writing |
2007-06-05 11:32:19 | **kaza94** |
this is reali good!!! well done!! i love your poetry! xx |
2007-09-02 15:35:08 | liberty moon |
i think being in love is most amazing but also most confusing. gr8 poem... i'm in love and love catching myself smiling for no reason. again lovely poem |