is this love?, by liberty moon
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is it okay for me to love u?
you occupy my every thought.
you've taken over my heart.
if this is love then i am a fool.
it has me running wild.
i could write love songs, in a fools paradise.
but i'm not in paradise, i'm just a fool in love. |
| Posted: 2007-07-18 15:15:59 UTC |
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| 2007-02-25 23:31:00 | Blackrose |
| This is a really good poem I know how you feel, I can relate.
Thanx 4 ur last comment 2 my poem! |
| 2007-03-01 01:17:49 | Lil'Fighter |
| Thanks for your comment to my poem. I love this poem! Great Job! :) |
| 2007-03-06 16:05:59 | Forbidden Heart |
| I can strongly feel the rhythm in this poem when i read it. very nice... |
| 2007-05-25 09:56:04 | **kaza94** |
| thnx 4 your comment on my poem i love this well done!!! |
| 2007-06-05 00:49:42 | Felicia |
| love your poems you are very good
Felicia |
| 2008-01-10 19:36:00 | Sheila |
| Pretty poem. |
| 2009-08-30 19:28:37 | izzy |
| this is amazing! its so sweet |