is this love?

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By liberty moon •

is it okay for me to love u? you occupy my every thought. you've taken over my heart. if this is love then i am a fool. it has me running wild. i could write love songs, in a fools paradise. but i'm not in paradise, i'm just a fool in love.

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February 25, 2007 23:31Blackrose

This is a really good poem I know how you feel, I can relate.
Thanx 4 ur last comment 2 my poem!

March 1, 2007 01:17Lil'Fighter

Thanks for your comment to my poem. I love this poem! Great Job! :)

March 1, 2007 03:52 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I like this poem! Glo

March 6, 2007 16:05Forbidden Heart

I can strongly feel the rhythm in this poem when i read it. very nice...

March 13, 2007 17:30~*PuRely*DeVine*~

looove this

May 25, 2007 09:56**kaza94**

thnx 4 your comment on my poem i love this well done!!!

June 5, 2007 00:49Felicia

love your poems you are very good
Felicia

January 10, 2008 19:36Sheila

Pretty poem.

August 30, 2009 19:28izzy

this is amazing! its so sweet