if i never messed up

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By .L. •

what the hek has gotten into this world? the most beautiful things are goin to waste the true things that are meant to be are falling apart we know that the love is there but we mess up. life is going perfectly, and then it hits like a slap in the face, like a belt on your butt the beauty of life is falling through your soapy hands it's slipping away and you cant seem to grasp it we want to wash it away but hold on at the same time but the odds are against us as the faucet of our life turns the soap seems to thicken we watch the love fall with the tears as the water stops the tears keep coming and they'll never stop :( all the good times we ever had, they dont matter now cuz there just memories memories that we'll have in the back of our minds along with the thoughts of what would have happened and where we would have been, if i never messed up

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February 26, 2007 04:44Lil'Fighter

Great Poem.

March 29, 2007 00:04Sithlim

as the water stops the tears keep coming
and they'll never stop :(
>>>>its simply wonderfull..
You were amazing..
but t o add a few of my thouhts.. remember ny dear friend life is made up of sweet memories.. the only preconditions is tahat you can not tag your memories wiht thoughts of " what would have happened"...good vocabulary and great comilation.. you may have messed up wiht he world..you definitely did not mess up wiht words.