Go To Hell

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By Chalan

You said that you would change just wait and see. Why did you have to lie to me? You said that you would never cheat on me. Now I know that there has been at least two. And now I really hate you! And my anger is growing in intensity. Why the fuck did you lie to me? For six years I have put up with your bullshit. And you calling me a stupid bitch. I had loved and cared for you. and this is all that you can do? You can fucking go to hell since you think you can lie so well. I wish I could stick your head on a stake. marrying you was a big mistake! To you I gave my body, soul and life and in return all that you can give is pain and strife. You can go to fucking hell and all you will hear is your kids' farewell. Why was I so fucking dumb? for you, why did my love succumb? Why was giving up my virginity such a must? Why did I have so much trust? I feel so dirty and used. And my love shattered and abused. I will never EVER come back to you!!

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February 27, 2007 01:10Chalan

Sorry for all the Swearing I was very angry at my ex husband when I wrote this poem.

February 27, 2007 14:32User

Wow...very very strong emotion with a lots and lots of anger as well..but honestly I kind of enjoy it..

February 27, 2007 18:37BananaIceCream

it's a good poem, and i guess the point in writing poetry is to express how you feel. well done

March 1, 2007 03:38 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Anger is a hard Taskmaster, but come to think about it now, I remember being this angry too... and it was about the time I got a divorce too! I'm glad I learned to forgive though, for it helped me to kill off alot of anger, before it killed me off! You have captured the emotion of anger very good! God bless you! Glo

March 16, 2007 14:59

that.. is amazing!! xx

December 11, 2008 07:42LostSoul

Thank you for the comment. This poem reminds me of what I've been going through. I wish you the best and thanks for sharing.

February 3, 2009 22:29miss insashable

you're right its similar to my poem. i know we often feel like we are the only ones going through wat we are going through. It's refreshing to see that we are not. And makes us thankful for the things others are going through we may not be going through. i dunno if that makes sense but i liked this poems, im glad ur angry in this poem dont ever cover ur true emotions and feelings. let it all out!! :)GOOD WORK