The Hospital,
A place where kids are afraid,
A place where the smell makes kids run away,
A place where the instruments are big and scary,
A place where doctors use tier needles.

The Hospital,
A place where I can be treated,
A place where my mum and I met for the first time,
A place where I was born,
A place where I meed caring doctors and nurses.

The Hospital,
A place where people die,
A place where people cry,
A place where people laugh,
A place where people suffer.

The Hospital,
A place which is as great as heaven,
A place which is as ghastly as hell,
A place where everyone will go to,
A place where despair comes and goes.

Hospital,
I need you. I hate you,
I love you yet you hate us,
You made me sad,
you made me happy.

We will never be apart...
Till the day...
The very last day...
I will be with you...
To close my eyes...

(PS: Please comment on this poem coze I actually won 1st
prize on a competition for this poem. and i want to know
what makes this poem good. thank you.)