The Hospital

The Hospital, A place where kids are afraid, A place where the smell makes kids run away, A place where the instruments are big and scary, A place where doctors use tier needles. The Hospital, A place where I can be treated, A place where my mum and I met for the first time, A place where I was born, A place where I meed caring doctors and nurses. The Hospital, A place where people die, A place where people cry, A place where people laugh, A place where people suffer. The Hospital, A place which is as great as heaven, A place which is as ghastly as hell, A place where everyone will go to, A place where despair comes and goes. Hospital, I need you. I hate you, I love you yet you hate us, You made me sad, you made me happy. We will never be apart... Till the day... The very last day... I will be with you... To close my eyes... (PS: Please comment on this poem coze I actually won 1st prize on a competition for this poem. and i want to know what makes this poem good. thank you.)