Escaping the Pain

By A Lonely Song • March 7, 2007 23:24 UTC

Getting drenched in the rain Releasing my pain Words fill my ear Followed by a melody I can only hear Constantly thinking Constantly sinking No one but you Knows my problems through and through

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March 10, 2007 04:43 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

good one!

March 10, 2007 21:22 *****Junior Walker*****

hey,nice to hear from you,im here trying to recapture my hunger for poetry,was thinking how to do it and ended up writing a poem about it in rough,it will probably end up on here as "sold my soul" not sure yet,nice poem,i think you can emphasise something well by doing it like you did,having the last line not rhyming and the rest rhyming,it emphasises the last line,nice work,keep pumping life into the site

April 10, 2007 00:45 *****Junior Walker*****

hey thanx for the comment,ye i have a myspace www.myspace.com/jay_w_999 add me when you can,o and i didnt know you could join the site at 14 Courtney