Leaving (12)

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By Angel of Music •

Soon I will not be here, Soon I will have to say goodbye. Goodbye home. Goodbye friends. Goodbye place I love. Soon I will be leaving. I will be leaving for somewhere new. A new adventure awaits me. But I don't know where. Maybe someday I will return, or maybe not. My life to come is a mystery. All I can do is live it. Soon I will be leaving. Please don't forget me once I say goodbye. Remember me home. Remember me friends. Remember me place I love.

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March 11, 2007 19:00Faith

It sounds almost like it should be a song...

April 2, 2007 14:56Mykl

Great job of expressing your feelings. I am sure that you will be remembered by your old friends, and will make many new ones. You are very talented and original. Live that.

April 23, 2007 02:39~**AGE_TEA**~

its great really great. very simple and its really great

May 1, 2007 14:25Let Go....

It has this sort of mysterious vibe to it which I really like. I think its one of the best poems Ive read. And I find it hard to be pleased. Great Work.

May 17, 2007 18:43Chuck Shorter

This is just awesome. For one so young, you have amazing foresight and vision.

May 24, 2007 17:19Teresa

I really liked it its great.

May 26, 2007 21:56Crimson.Wings

Beautiful poem, and thanks for your comments.

August 4, 2007 22:42Sarah

I like this poem it is written very well

August 8, 2007 09:14debbie

Im sure they will all miss you, now you can enrich others lives,, good luck,
thankyou for your comments on my work.

September 9, 2007 01:00-fruit-loop-

.,., it sounds to m e,., like you dont want to go .,,.,.
i read your intro,,. about the comments and not knowing who read what and commented on where.., with out having to look thru them all.. a new comment shud should be some how different until you have read it,.., :),.., ok .,., have fun,.,.

April 27, 2009 18:35Only one ggirl right for me

I love this one. I know you have your meaning behind it and what it means to you. But It hits real close to home for me. Its how I feel to the tea.

October 11, 2010 20:48beautyisinside

I really like this poem it reminded me of the time i left but in the end it wrked out 4 the best