Heaven, by Simply-Me-20104
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Our souls long for this place in the sky,
Where we go when we die.
An unseen place, beyond the clouds,
Above the place where a lion prowls.
Where we are, before we begin,
And where we go, when we end.
Beauty beyond our imaginations.
One of God's great creations.
Ready or not, young or old,
Murder, natural, poor or with gold.
Back to our father, our home.
A beautiful place to roam.
Whether we are four, sixty, or eleven,
We are all welcomed into heaven. |
Posted: 2007-03-17 04:47:47 UTC |
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2007-03-24 05:04:34 | Angel of Music |
Hey! Great poem! thanks for commenting on mine too! |
2008-06-27 20:36:01 | Nora Eason |
Thank you for your sweet comment.
But I must tell you, unfortunely not everyone will get to heaven if they die without accepting Jesus as their Lord and Savior.it doesn't matter how good that person is,if he or she doesn't know Jesus they won't go to heaven.
After this I hope I don't upset you. |
2013-09-06 22:32:24 | Kissmyassandcallmesally |
Very good poem. I like the flow and rhyme. I appreciate you looking at mine. |