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I just thought it would be fun to do this, all you have to
so, is leave a line of poetry(or as many as you want) and I
will add it to this poem! This can be an extremely awesome
poem... but I need YOU to help me out! :)


When darkness creeps into one's life,
with excruciating pain and vehement strife. 
There's hope to find a better way, 
if we just walk another day.
All will come, in due time.
Even in this rhyme
To find ourselves in light again
Never look back at the pain again, 
it seems so hard to do but in the end 
it becomes of what you want it
Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves
that glorifies the true purpose of life
For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the
tinkling tune of a fife.
believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a
knife
WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.
A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and
Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's
Living above a selfish Hate!
A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those
who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight
The past comes to bind you tight We must push to the future
with some delight



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When darkness creeps into one's life,
with excruciating pain and vehement strife. 
There's hope to find a better way, 
if we just walk another day.    (Glostarg)

All will come, in due time. (Julieeee) 

Even in this rhyme (anna) 

To find ourselves in light again (liberty moon)

Never look back at the pain again, 
it seems so hard to do but in the end 
it becomes of what you want it to
               (Insanity of Ones Self (your comments are
greatly appreciated))

Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves
that glorifies the true purpose of life (Expressive Child)

For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the
tinkling tune of a fife. (Kicon)

believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a
knife  (Smiling Darkness)

WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.
(true poet)

A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and
Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's
Living above a selfish Hate! (CAPRISTAR)

A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those
who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight 
(Invisible Poet)

The past comes to bind you tight We must push to the future
with some delight (Feltuz)
Posted: 2010-04-12 03:28:59 UTC

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2007-03-25 21:31:04julieeeeeeeeeee
All will come, in due time.

2007-04-04 17:26:40anna
Even in this little rhyme

2007-04-05 16:57:12liberty moon
to find ourselves in light again

2007-08-25 16:33:54User
Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves that glorifies the true purpose of life.

2007-10-21 05:01:51Kicon
For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the tinkling tune of a fife.

2007-12-18 03:16:40SMILING DARKNESS
believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a knife.

2010-04-04 18:13:20O.P.E.N.(Only Poets Explain Nothing)
The past comes to bind you tight We must push to the future with some delight