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By Chalan

I'm finally happy. I'm starting to discover me and all my capabilities. I have taken the first big stride. Now I'm starting over with a new man by my side. I'm no longer afraid and wondering what i should do. I feel better now that I have left you. I wish you could see that this decision didn't come to me easily. I have shed many tears but now I'm free and overcoming my fears. I once did love you and I Know that you did to. But to myself I wouldn't have been true if I stayed . I deserve better and so do you. I'm just happy to be free and to be able to discover me.

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April 18, 2007 23:59 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Chalan..I like the easy flow and rhyme of this poem .very good! but best is it's message! I related to this poem most because Freedom is what God wants for each of us, but he also wants us to Love ourself too! a scripture reads: Love thy neighbor as thyself....but if we cannot love ourself???how are we to effectively and sincerlylove our neighbor?
( neighbor meaning anyone other than ourself)
You did a great job with this poem!

April 28, 2009 01:22!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL