Free, by Chalan
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I'm finally happy.
I'm starting to discover
me
and all my capabilities.
I have taken the first
big stride.
Now I'm starting over
with a new man by my side.
I'm no longer afraid and
wondering what i should do.
I feel better now that I
have left you.
I wish you could see
that this decision didn't
come to me easily.
I have shed many tears
but now I'm free and
overcoming my fears.
I once did love you and I
Know that you did to.
But to myself I wouldn't
have been true if I stayed .
I deserve better and so do
you.
I'm just happy to be free
and to be able to discover me.
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| Posted: 2007-03-19 02:53:53 UTC |
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| 2007-04-18 23:59:00 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| Hi Chalan..I like the easy flow and rhyme of this poem .very good! but best is it's message! I related to this poem most because Freedom is what God wants for each of us, but he also wants us to Love ourself too! a scripture reads: Love thy neighbor as thyself....but if we cannot love ourself???how are we to effectively and sincerlylove our neighbor?
( neighbor meaning anyone other than ourself)
You did a great job with this poem! |