Deep-Down, She's Quivering, Waiting For A Soul To Lay In

By Tim Pozzi •
By Tim Pozzi •
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hmm... i like it
well!1 is all can say.
wow! great describtions!=]
ohhh i don't do i.....well don't take it the wrong way but you got some judging issues if u think like that....first of all i waz jk bc thts my sister so u don't know who i am to be telling me i don't know metaphor or meanging bc i know alot more then u....sorry but yahh.....plz whoever u are just don't be so nasty okk!!!!!! nothin against u.....just sayin....but ur poems r okk i guess!!!!!
blah!! XD lol!!!
A**hole-thnz for dissing my bff/sis AND my poem which i was jk (just kidding, just in case u r so stupid not to kno what that stood for) and thnx for commenting my poem on insanity...God! :-/ i was just joking, but u cant take a joke and laugh-oh watever-u actually remind me of someone, but then he fell to the floor and threw up bc someone found out that he was gay...ttylz...and nice poem btw...ttylz and stop writing bad-if u dont like it, keep ur mother effin mouth shut-thank u and that is all-SMILE x)